Enough (Chapter 5)

This story is part of a novella – A girl was born

Do check out the first and the subsequent chapters – https://firsttimemommy.net/category/a-z-blogging-challenge-2018/

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Everybody Tara knew had ambitions; one friend wanted to work for a multinational bank, while another wanted to teach. And one friend just wanted to marry an NRI and live in the US or UK. Even Tara had an ambition. She wanted to be a mother. She knew she could be a wonderful mother.

Her friends asked her, “But what’s so special about being a mother!”

She told them, “Whatever we are today, we owe it to our mother. She works hard, she protects us and sacrifices her ambitions and desires so that she can see us grow. She gives children values. She is the force behind the society. I want to be one such mother.”

Her friends didn’t understand her, but she didn’t care much. She was focused – she wanted to be a mother, and for that she had to find a suitable man first.

Her father was more than happy to oblige. He was from a family where girls married early. Her brothers’ daughters were long married. He was already at the receiving end of his family’s taunts as he had yet not started looking for a prospective groom for Tara.

Tara met the first suitor. She was very excited. Wearing a pretty strawberry pink sari, she welcomed the suitor and his family. She served everyone tea and snacks. And then the man and Tara were left alone in the room to talk. She waited for some time for the person to initiate a conversation. But he didn’t. He kept his head down and refused to even look at her. Tired of waiting, she took the matters in her hand.

“Do you like to read books?” It was a harmless question and if he replied in positive, she knew they would have much to talk to.

“Books??” He smirked. “I don’t even get time to read the newspaper. It’s only work, work and more work for me.”

Tara’s smile froze. She had nothing against workaholics, they were nice people, but they were not for her. She wanted a husband who was more than a guest in his house, who went for grocery shopping with her and who helped her raise the kids.

She refused the proposal.

A few days later another proposal came for her. This boy was completely opposite to the first one. He talked without taking a pause. Tara couldn’t even get a word in edgewise. She wanted a husband, not a chatterbox. It didn’t look nice when men talked so much.

Disappointed with the kind of men she was meeting, she told her parents, “I don’t want to marry anymore.” They were shocked but thought she would come around in sometime.

Would Tara ever come around?? Come tomorrow to read Face in the crowd


About Anshu Bhojnagarwala

Fiction Addict. Agatha Christie Fan.
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24 Responses to Enough (Chapter 5)

  1. Neethu says:

    Whee..I woke up and the first thing I did was check if you had posted…even me always wanted to get married young and be a santoor Mommy…but you know the rest of the story..😜can’t wait for tomorrows part..inbetween I really wanto know you..your name so I could address you as …di!!!!pleaseme at gokul.neethu@gmail.com😍

    • mammaspeaks says:

      Hi Neethu, you made my day! I really look forward to your comments, seriously! When I realized you hadn’t commented on any of my posts for a few days, I went to check yours yesterday and saw your 1st April ka post. I was so happy to see your post and read it. I am Anshu Bhojnagarwala, will mail you shortly, it will come from mammaspeaks@gmail.com in case it reaches your spam folder. Love you!! ❤

  2. syncwithdeep says:

    Realistic.. I like the way you narrated.

  3. Meha Sharma says:

    Oh the groom hunting began for Tara! It is not as easy as she thought it would be, isn’t it? Looking forward for more.

    • mammaspeaks says:

      Not at all, she has a lot to go before she finds herself a groom.. a perfect one, that remains to be seen. Thanks Meha for reading and liking Tara! 🙂

  4. Balaka says:

    In India we meet such weird characters when marriage proposals come. Looking forward to the next installment.

  5. Your post reminded me of the days when I went bride hunting. Now eager to see will Tara find the match in her third suitor.


    • mammaspeaks says:

      Thanks for liking Rohan! I am sure you must have had some pretty stories to share too of that period. Do look for the next post to know what happened with Tara!

  6. Ah.. that’s so soon.. it’s like seeing ur daughter getting married..
    Beautifully told.

  7. Neethu says:

    Absolutely 🤗

  8. Aesha says:

    I like the way you are building the story Anshu..I didn’t read for a few days as wanted to read a couple of posts together. Didn’t want the suspense to kill me.

  9. Shalzmojo says:

    Awww that was sweet that she just wanted to get married; thank god she has the common sense to not get married to just about anyone! Good to see her stand her ground.

  10. Dipika Singh says:

    Hahaa… She is smart, as I mentioned earlier. She knows whats right for her, unlike many other from this age bracket. Tara is rockstar.

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