#TellTaleThursday – 7th March 2019

The rules are simple:

  • Write a story, complete in itself.
  • Check spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
  • Copy and paste your Story URL to the inLinkz list.
  • The story should be up to 250 words.
  • Add this line < #TellTaleThursday with Anshu & Priya > at the end of the post.
  • Read, comment and share – spread the love.

Here’s the prompt:

An uninvited guest to a party


Word count – 249 Words

A ruined evening

On entering her bedroom suite, Mrs. Wadia noticed the maid had forgotten to shut the window. Mrs. Wadia cursed unladylike and proceeded to shut it.

As soon as she emerged, the maid came running. “Madam! The cook accidentally dropped the soup tureen.”

“Oh! I will order some soup from the restaurant down the lane.” She was shaken but it would do her no good to be upset at tiny things.

The guests arrived except Mr. and Mrs. Irani. The doorbell rang and the latecomers entered.

Now, who was this girl with them? Mrs. Wadia wondered.

“Hello Delnaz, my niece missed her flight. She said she would stay at home alone but I would not hear of it. I told her we are visiting friends and she will be welcome at Delnaz’s.”

Mrs. Wadia was not amused. Little was she to know that this girl was not the only unexpected visitor of the evening. The  dining table was set, not only she would now need to make an extra place for the young girl but also fetch a chair from the study. And that chair would not match the dining chairs.

The guests seated themselves around the table and appreciated the flavourful aromas that filled the room. Mrs. Wadia smiled.

The maid brought the soup tureen and as she began to serve, a fat gecko fell in it. The guests started laughing. Mrs. Wadia on the other hand gasped, she was mortified with shame and rage. And then she fainted.

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About Anshu Bhojnagarwala

Fiction Addict. Agatha Christie Fan.
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8 Responses to #TellTaleThursday – 7th March 2019

  1. Nobbinmaug says:

    I take it Mrs. Wadia doesn’t like gecko soup. Poor Mrs. Wadia. I know how it is to want everything to go perfectly, and nothing does.

  2. Neethu says:

    Hilarious and funny di

  3. geekanika says:

    Ha! hilarious. loved it. And to think she fretted about the girl. that soup sure was jinxed

  4. Priya says:

    haha… I would have fainted too. Must confess, not fond of these reptiles.
    Good one, Anshu.
    And we all have uninvited guests at some point or the other, don’t we?

  5. Abhijit Ray says:

    Poor Mrs Wadia was process conscious. But gecko falling in soup bowl was gross. I lost my appetite. I hear Parsi dinners are excellent.

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